These three visuals are kaleidoscopes that originally started off as a picture of a hand. In the visuals I can barely see that it started off as a picture of a hand. Also, the 1st kaleidoscope is very dark, the 2nd kaleidoscope gets lighter and the 3rd kaleidoscope is extremely vibrant. In the 1st kaleidoscope there are squares in the corners and center. In the center square there is also a triangle. In the outer corner inside each square is a circle. The 1st kaleidoscope has asymmetrical symmetry. In the 2nd kaleidoscope there are multiple triangles scattered throughout. The 2nd kaleidoscope has asymmetrical symmetry. In the 3rd kaleidoscope there is weird shapes but it looks really cool. Also in the 3rd kaleidoscope, the figure is a bright pink point in four corners and the middle. My eye goes directly toward the pink spots. The 3rd kaleidoscope has asymmetrical symmetry as well. The strongest of the three artworks is the 3rd kaleidoscope because the colors are vibrant and lively. I personally find brighter colors more pleasing rather than dark like the 1st and 2nd kaleidoscope. When an image has lots of colors it makes it fun to look at while dark images are very dull and boring. I think the 1st kaleidoscope could be approved just by changing the color. When you added different colors to the 2nd and 3rd kaleidoscope it made it more interesting and fun. You can improve the 2st kaleidoscope by changing the color by going under the Image tab, next adjustments, and lastly choose from exposures or Brightness and contrast.
Effort: 4 Composition/Symmetry: 3.5 (some are off kilter. Use your ruler guidelines to make sure you get straight lines) Submission of All work: 4 Craftsmanship: 1.5 (so many gaps! Line up your edges) Artist Reflection: 0 Missing 13/20= 75%
Your designs and colors are really awesome and your use of filters is super creative. However your craftsmanship needs work. You have so many mistakes with open gaps and edges not meeting up it hurts your design. Also do your reflection to bring up your grade.
These three visuals are kaleidoscopes that originally started off as a picture of a hand. In the visuals I can barely see that it started off as a picture of a hand. Also, the 1st kaleidoscope is very dark, the 2nd kaleidoscope gets lighter and the 3rd kaleidoscope is extremely vibrant. In the 1st kaleidoscope there are squares in the corners and center. In the center square there is also a triangle. In the outer corner inside each square is a circle. The 1st kaleidoscope has asymmetrical symmetry. In the 2nd kaleidoscope there are multiple triangles scattered throughout. The 2nd kaleidoscope has asymmetrical symmetry. In the 3rd kaleidoscope there is weird shapes but it looks really cool. Also in the 3rd kaleidoscope, the figure is a bright pink point in four corners and the middle. My eye goes directly toward the pink spots. The 3rd kaleidoscope has asymmetrical symmetry as well.
ReplyDeleteThe strongest of the three artworks is the 3rd kaleidoscope because the colors are vibrant and lively. I personally find brighter colors more pleasing rather than dark like the 1st and 2nd kaleidoscope. When an image has lots of colors it makes it fun to look at while dark images are very dull and boring.
I think the 1st kaleidoscope could be approved just by changing the color. When you added different colors to the 2nd and 3rd kaleidoscope it made it more interesting and fun. You can improve the 2st kaleidoscope by changing the color by going under the Image tab, next adjustments, and lastly choose from exposures or Brightness and contrast.
Thx for the feedback I will definitely work on adding more color if I ever get a chance to work on a project similar to this
DeleteEffort: 4
ReplyDeleteComposition/Symmetry: 3.5 (some are off kilter. Use your ruler guidelines to make sure you get straight lines)
Submission of All work: 4
Craftsmanship: 1.5 (so many gaps! Line up your edges)
Artist Reflection: 0 Missing
13/20= 75%
Your designs and colors are really awesome and your use of filters is super creative. However your craftsmanship needs work. You have so many mistakes with open gaps and edges not meeting up it hurts your design.
Also do your reflection to bring up your grade.